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Floating World Posterby ~Jezhawk

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The poster version for my Graphic Illustration class - in which we had to design a poster for an exhibit for the Royal Ontario Museum.
Feedback would be appreciated.

~FreeSpirit2Moon Apr 10, 2008 Photographer

The only input I have is to maybe blend the text in a bit more with the rest of the piece. Right now it looks like a drawn piece with computer text over it. It doesn't quite mesh right....Could also be because of how close the text is to the moon, I think it might mess with the perspective a bit, makes you loose some of the depth in the piece. Over all though it looks great. Just some little things that you could think about working on.

~Jezhawk Apr 10, 2008 Professional Interface Designer

I agree, my teacher says the same thing, I'm going to rework that area a bit to give me some more space. Final projects are always the hardest...I'm all out of inspiration and drive

~FreeSpirit2Moon Apr 10, 2008 Photographer

Oh no

Well I have faith, I am sure you can do it, and it will be brilliant.

~Jezhawk Apr 10, 2008 Professional Interface Designer

thanks

~sweetmisery11 Apr 10, 2008

oh wow. its beautiful. lol. nice job jenny. i really need to get started on mine. lol

~Jezhawk Apr 10, 2008 Professional Interface Designer

thanks - will be showing it to Peter today, I hope he likes it!

!SaMaeL696 Apr 9, 2008

i love it, but i have to complain about something (sorry!). the logo on the bottom left is not easily visible. you might want to consider changing the colors or adding something behind it so it pops. everything else is great, as usual.

~Jezhawk Apr 9, 2008 Professional Interface Designer

huh - totally didn't see that before - but the blue just blends right into the background. Well I'll be showing it to my teacher tomorrow so I'll check with him if it's ok to change it to white.
Thanks so much for the feedback.

!SaMaeL696 Apr 9, 2008

im glad i could be of help.

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